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The End of the Beginning / はじめてのおしまい
G31214Hajimete no Oshimai
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Naughty Chiaki teases naive Shou during a game of hide-and-seek leading to far reaching consequences as they grow older.
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What can I say? Is a good story. How can you know that? If one of these stories we remove the pornographic part and still have a coherent argument that you want to follow, we have a good story.
The return of the childhood friend to give the glorious sex he dreaming all his life. Outstanding!
Despite what has been said in the comments above, if you remove the sex from the story it wouldn't be good. There wouldn't even be a story. However, that doesn't devalue the weight of the narrative, nor it's power. Some may believe a good story of this nature is only good because of what happens around the sex, but it's not. It's about the meaning within. Sex is something integral to life and growing up, and to say it can be removed with no ill effects to this story is absurd. When the sex has emotional depth and meaning, when it changes a character in such a way as it did, I cannot imagine the story without it. He was taken advantage of as a child, and he submitted. To her, it was just something fun to do. To him it became something more. He had to watch her abandon him not once but twice. Even when he tries to move on he's still trapped in the dream, in his submission, because she was his first, but he was only her toy. A story worth less without the sex, and more with it. Deep stuff
Yhea just remove the porn stuff or rather dont mind it and focus on the story and you would only see a good and sad story that has sex in it. All in all 5/5
The storyline is good. It leaves a good ***** would recommend this to everyone who faps for sexy content and looves storylines
welp , the feeling i got is ... damn. the most fitting choice to be placed in pururin top manga hall of flames. the other is just trash
Seriously, how is this not good? I mean, if your definition of good is something like the thinky stuff like Steins;Gate, Lain and Paranoia Agent, then whatever I guess.
i love when the girl over powers the guy and how small he was and the way she touched him as a child and she was a kid
Tous girl is just a whore! I home she'll die dlowly with lot of suffering for coing that To tais poor boy
Ahem, So the point of the story is to make us feel like we enjoy it then hit us in the guts. Great Story, Try again next year.
I read this doujin a year ago and I still don't know why it resonates so well with me. Probably the most bittersweet doujin I've read, it has that harsh bite of reality.
It was good I kinda hope we'll I do hope it keeps going in the next manga like she would go back to him and say hey what are you doing then she just uses him like a boy toy knowing that he loves her and she loves him but wont let him truly love her in retrun it would be a really good manga series.
Good story, I enjoyed it although it aroused me non it was an interesting concept and it would have been nice if it had more pages. It did what it needed to in 16 pages and finished the story, I think it could have been longer though. Also I suck at reviewing.
So basically the girl couldn't stand the thought of losing her pet-boy's virginity and took it as she could with a moment of fleeting self-awareness at the end. Kind of fucked up.
I tend think about this doujin a lot.
It's cool in terms of art but it's that fuckin story that gets to me every time. It pulls and rips at my heart strings but I can never seem to forget about it. That's how you know you got good story.
I wish there was a sequel.
Fuck Chiaki.
It's cool in terms of art but it's that fuckin story that gets to me every time. It pulls and rips at my heart strings but I can never seem to forget about it. That's how you know you got good story.
I wish there was a sequel.
Fuck Chiaki.
Finally... An anime that was similar to mine. The conclusion hasn’t yet to me, but hopefully one day. That hit the kokoro pretty hard. Red to find more mangas/anime/Hentai like this again.
>>4881 @ Lily Loli
Thanks for the porn analysis bruh
Thanks for the porn analysis bruh
This was actually really good I like how it had a story to many of these have no story and it's boring I wouldn't have minded this being a bit longer
deeply cute, intense, and sad. it made me think about Bukowski's "Trapped in a dream I wanted. That's all. Baaaad shit..." this is the best psychological hentai i've ever read, because i had a girl like that too.
>>4881 @ Lily Loli
the most deeply argumented comment I've ever read here. that's how an artists work should be read! in all of it's introspective parts, details, and meanings. this is not possible for all the works here, but for this one, it is essential, not only to understand it, but to realize that, in the end, there is still a soul deep in our hearts, and eyes, and hands. you know what? I would really be pleasured to know more about you, Lily, I swear :) cause even in this context, you're the first that made me think about something I forgot!
the most deeply argumented comment I've ever read here. that's how an artists work should be read! in all of it's introspective parts, details, and meanings. this is not possible for all the works here, but for this one, it is essential, not only to understand it, but to realize that, in the end, there is still a soul deep in our hearts, and eyes, and hands. you know what? I would really be pleasured to know more about you, Lily, I swear :) cause even in this context, you're the first that made me think about something I forgot!
Well, I have read pretty much all the comments here concerning the manga presented. I will not give my opinion just yet as first I feel compelled to say that the first comment followed by an unexpected backfire was extremely unnecessary.
The first comment was certainly ambiguous in relation to what the writer meant by "pornographic part", but it is more than feasible — as it is of common sense — that the writer had in thought the explicit images, not sex in itself; Backfiring without having a reasonable excogitation on the subject oneself will criticise is highly deplorable. Next time, let us all read with care to attempt to avoid any redundancy and inutile controversy; Without the presence of a solid ground (facts), there is no argument.
Now, pleading the fifth, I must say that the manga is supposed to be obsolete as the story is degrading and a source of astronomical lasciviousness. If I blindly declared that this story has no power I would surely be deceiving myself as the story has a tremendous psychological impact on its reader, inducing him/her to accept this ominous prurience in which will surely disgrace society in the long-run, but most appalling, one individual's ethos, as the product of uncontrollable phallic exhilaration.
Firstly, the story is immoral, having as constituent a huge sense of paedophilia and lack of principles, that is thoroughly present in all characters. The exploitation of the miss to satisfy the protagonist blaze of desires for a senior which abused him and led him to a distorted path is an indicator for how atrocious the manga is.
'A good story...' one might say without fully possessing the understanding of why the story is 'good'. As a entrenched convention, a good story has, virtually, the ability to immerge readers in the story, and the tool for conceiving this is by turning *interesting* thoughts expressed in written or visual (or both) content into a coherent and intelligible plot of events. Since when has this abominable mentation be able to produce entertaining and lewd content mutually?! I shall never be apologetic to what my eyes caught a glimpse of in this actual moment, and hopefully, in my view, all should duplicate this in their deeds.
Acknowledging that this post is one of the most popular on the website, I cannot hinder myself from being filled with dread upon each of the readers' mental health.
Do not neglect or bury the fact that this is my sincere opinion, and as the wise says:
"With opinions, there are no discussions."
The first comment was certainly ambiguous in relation to what the writer meant by "pornographic part", but it is more than feasible — as it is of common sense — that the writer had in thought the explicit images, not sex in itself; Backfiring without having a reasonable excogitation on the subject oneself will criticise is highly deplorable. Next time, let us all read with care to attempt to avoid any redundancy and inutile controversy; Without the presence of a solid ground (facts), there is no argument.
Now, pleading the fifth, I must say that the manga is supposed to be obsolete as the story is degrading and a source of astronomical lasciviousness. If I blindly declared that this story has no power I would surely be deceiving myself as the story has a tremendous psychological impact on its reader, inducing him/her to accept this ominous prurience in which will surely disgrace society in the long-run, but most appalling, one individual's ethos, as the product of uncontrollable phallic exhilaration.
Firstly, the story is immoral, having as constituent a huge sense of paedophilia and lack of principles, that is thoroughly present in all characters. The exploitation of the miss to satisfy the protagonist blaze of desires for a senior which abused him and led him to a distorted path is an indicator for how atrocious the manga is.
'A good story...' one might say without fully possessing the understanding of why the story is 'good'. As a entrenched convention, a good story has, virtually, the ability to immerge readers in the story, and the tool for conceiving this is by turning *interesting* thoughts expressed in written or visual (or both) content into a coherent and intelligible plot of events. Since when has this abominable mentation be able to produce entertaining and lewd content mutually?! I shall never be apologetic to what my eyes caught a glimpse of in this actual moment, and hopefully, in my view, all should duplicate this in their deeds.
Acknowledging that this post is one of the most popular on the website, I cannot hinder myself from being filled with dread upon each of the readers' mental health.
Do not neglect or bury the fact that this is my sincere opinion, and as the wise says:
"With opinions, there are no discussions."
declared that this story has no power I would surely be deceiving myself as the story has a tremendous psychological impact on its reader, inducing him/her to accept this ominous prurience in which will surely disgrace society in the long-run, but most appalling, one individual's ethos, as the product of uncontrollable phallic exhilaration.
Firstly, the story is immoral, having as constituent a huge sense of paedophilia and lack of principles, that is thoroughly present in all characters. The exploitation of the miss to satisfy the protagonist blaze of desires for a senior which abused him and led him to a distorted path is an indicator for how atrocious the manga is.
'A good story...' one might say without fully possessing the understanding of why the story is 'good'. As a entrenched convention, a good story has, virtually, the ability to immerge readers in the story, and the tool for conceiving this is by turning *interesting* thoughts expressed in written or visual (or both) content into a coherent and intelligible plot of events. Since when has this abominable mentation be able to produce entertaining and lewd content mutually?! I shall never be apologetic to what my eyes caught a glimpse of in this actual moment, and hopefully, in my view, all should duplicate this in their deeds.
Acknowledging that this post is one of the most popular on the website, I cannot hinder myself from being filled with dread upon each of the readers' mental health.
Do not neglect or bury the fact that this is my sincere opinion, and as the wise says:
"With opinions, there are no discussions."
Firstly, the story is immoral, having as constituent a huge sense of paedophilia and lack of principles, that is thoroughly present in all characters. The exploitation of the miss to satisfy the protagonist blaze of desires for a senior which abused him and led him to a distorted path is an indicator for how atrocious the manga is.
'A good story...' one might say without fully possessing the understanding of why the story is 'good'. As a entrenched convention, a good story has, virtually, the ability to immerge readers in the story, and the tool for conceiving this is by turning *interesting* thoughts expressed in written or visual (or both) content into a coherent and intelligible plot of events. Since when has this abominable mentation be able to produce entertaining and lewd content mutually?! I shall never be apologetic to what my eyes caught a glimpse of in this actual moment, and hopefully, in my view, all should duplicate this in their deeds.
Acknowledging that this post is one of the most popular on the website, I cannot hinder myself from being filled with dread upon each of the readers' mental health.
Do not neglect or bury the fact that this is my sincere opinion, and as the wise says:
"With opinions, there are no discussions."
conceiving this is by turning *interesting* thoughts expressed in written or visual (or both) content into a coherent and intelligible plot of events. Since when has this abominable mentation be able to produce entertaining and lewd content mutually?! I shall never be apologetic to what my eyes caught a glimpse of in this actual moment, and hopefully, in my view, all should duplicate this in their deeds.
Acknowledging that this post is one of the most popular on the website, I cannot hinder myself from being filled with dread upon each of the readers' mental health.
Do not neglect or bury the fact that this is my sincere opinion, and as the wise says:
"With opinions, there are no discussions."
Acknowledging that this post is one of the most popular on the website, I cannot hinder myself from being filled with dread upon each of the readers' mental health.
Do not neglect or bury the fact that this is my sincere opinion, and as the wise says:
"With opinions, there are no discussions."
To think all the people who've read this will be silently interlinked by bitersweetness of a love they all never felt.
The way everyone is reacting to this story writes a better story than the story itself.
The story is conventionally bittersweet, to the point the twist was bland but this comment is not mean to be a critique on the story.
Of more interest, is the people that appeal to critical rationalism. I find myself thinking he deserved nothing and the expectations he had were just that. For him to expect more was a foolish mistake. It pains me to say that; however, it is not mutually exclusive for the moral viewpoint that actions of Chiaki are questionable. In the end this story is not a parable, there is no moral lesson to be found here.
My mental health is fine, but my heart is not. I am thankful that I never had an experience like the one portrayed in the story because if I did, I surely would not be strong enough.
The story is conventionally bittersweet, to the point the twist was bland but this comment is not mean to be a critique on the story.
Of more interest, is the people that appeal to critical rationalism. I find myself thinking he deserved nothing and the expectations he had were just that. For him to expect more was a foolish mistake. It pains me to say that; however, it is not mutually exclusive for the moral viewpoint that actions of Chiaki are questionable. In the end this story is not a parable, there is no moral lesson to be found here.
My mental health is fine, but my heart is not. I am thankful that I never had an experience like the one portrayed in the story because if I did, I surely would not be strong enough.
#Vizier
Not meant to be a critique, you wrote, but that is thoroughly what you did.
The first paragraph shows your view of the story as it reveals your bias.
You start the second paragraph giving the good and bad points (respectively), but then you state that the comment is not supposed to be a critique.
Yeah, no problems until here. If you continued your comment without giving either bad or good points, but rather neutral, then your comment would be coherent. However, that is not what you did. Lol
Not meant to be a critique, you wrote, but that is thoroughly what you did.
The first paragraph shows your view of the story as it reveals your bias.
You start the second paragraph giving the good and bad points (respectively), but then you state that the comment is not supposed to be a critique.
Yeah, no problems until here. If you continued your comment without giving either bad or good points, but rather neutral, then your comment would be coherent. However, that is not what you did. Lol
>>4881 @ Lily Loliits a porno
>>64109 @ Kek
Open your heart a feel the art. Let porn mean something more
Open your heart a feel the art. Let porn mean something more
>>4881 @ Lily Loli
Maybe not the sex stuff just the porn aspect. That means not focusing on the sex scene and more on the feels.
Maybe not the sex stuff just the porn aspect. That means not focusing on the sex scene and more on the feels.
>>72481 @ Anonymous
But Lily's earlier point was that the sex- and the porn- was intricately intertwined with the emotions you feel upon reading it. Sex is not valueless, nor is porn. It can be good or bad, meaningful or not, depending on how it is portrayed, same as any other storytelling device. In this case the author clearly wanted both to create porn to titillate and also to write something they thought was meaningful, not just one or the other. You can see that in the work. The pornographic aspects and the emotional aspects play off of one another to create a larger whole that is still being discussed.
That said, I do think the discussion, while not unwarranted, is somewhat overplaying the depth of this story. As was said earlier this story is very conventional; I'm sure there are dozens if not hundreds of other works on this site that follow a similar if not identical pattern. But that doesn't mean it's bad, either. A conventional plot done well is still a well-done story, and that's what matters when it comes to getting people to relate to it. It's fluff, but it's nice fluff, and there's nothing wrong with that.
But Lily's earlier point was that the sex- and the porn- was intricately intertwined with the emotions you feel upon reading it. Sex is not valueless, nor is porn. It can be good or bad, meaningful or not, depending on how it is portrayed, same as any other storytelling device. In this case the author clearly wanted both to create porn to titillate and also to write something they thought was meaningful, not just one or the other. You can see that in the work. The pornographic aspects and the emotional aspects play off of one another to create a larger whole that is still being discussed.
That said, I do think the discussion, while not unwarranted, is somewhat overplaying the depth of this story. As was said earlier this story is very conventional; I'm sure there are dozens if not hundreds of other works on this site that follow a similar if not identical pattern. But that doesn't mean it's bad, either. A conventional plot done well is still a well-done story, and that's what matters when it comes to getting people to relate to it. It's fluff, but it's nice fluff, and there's nothing wrong with that.
Really? The #1 most popular straight shota search and it's some vanilla shit where a girl jerks off a guy and then rides him?
Fucking normies.
Fucking normies.
I had one or two Chiakis in my life. They left me dreaming. I still remember those long gone days. Memories are always a sweet place to run away... But let it go in order to live tomorrow.
christ chiaki is a real bitch, I would have beat her senseless after she said that "i'm happy with my boyfriend" bit
Alright, I found everyone's reaction over the years very interesting. So if you read the manga when you are not in the haze of lust, it is quite clear that the story is quite basic and not that great as well. However, this doesn't mean it isn't relatable especially if you had experiences with unrequited love. One thing to come to terms with is Chiaki is indeed a bad person, maybe when both were smaller and didn't really know better this was understandable but when they "grew up" it is not acceptable. At that point all she can do in good faith is either talk things over with the guy or completely remove herself from his life. Her coming back and onto the guy is disrespectful to everyone included, not to mention to her bf which is being cheated on. A better story would be if they met each other again in highschool where they are at the height of their adolesence, or if we are to keep the core timeline intact making the epilogue of how their adult life turned out in terms of relationships, did the guy understood he was emotionally used by a narcissist? The Chiaki ever realised she was horrible to both guys? Was the girlfriend alright with being someone that was hung up on another person? The story is cut prematurely and not in the most clever way, it uses this sense of bittersweet relatibility to mask the fact that narrative didn't go forward much.
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