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Anonymous
WTF?! THAT'S SO FUCKING SAD! I came to masturbate, not to feel...
ALMA KARMA
WOW! ...Such a POWERFUL ENDING!
Anonymous
What the fuck with that ending??!! What the fucking fuck!!??
Anonymous
MOTHER FUCKERRRRR
Kirreno
The feels
Apple
Glad I read the comments before masturbating
so, he killed her?
Anonymous
Wait wtf is that mean???
lol
BronzeRobot
What the hell? I need answers!
gr8alex
I think it was that he wasn't able to meet up with her anymore because they tore it down to build the mall, that he planned out.
Anonymous
Fuck that ending tho
Anonymous
a really sad ending i want a sequel with an happy ending
Lord Venom
Sad feels... Bad feels... Ninja's cutting onions...
Munmin
I came here to cum not to cry gawdammit
Anonymous
holy shit man this ending. make me so sad
no no no why. WHY FeelsBadMan
Anonymous
Damn that sucks...why u gotta hit me in the feels?!
Anonymous
the fuck?
the story is awful
Luciferu
Onore dikeido!!!!!
gosuto
feels...really bad man
Kraken
Here I thought the title is based of the girl being blind, never thought that it was because of the ending is like that. Damn
NuRa
Oh my....
Fuck
Where the fuc is the happy ending
SuperOni
That unexpected punch in the feels.
MADAO
What the actual fuccccccccccck
Cate
What a disheartening ending...................continuation pls.
-2
Anonymous
Bruh adjust the age of the girl and this could be one of the most heartbreaking short stories ever written.
Anonymous
Damn, that fuckin ending...

I'm just gonna imagine a better one...
ughhhhh, right in the feels, my night was already bad enough.
Random otaku boy
Im born to fap
not to feel

FUCK
ZERO
(-_-) WTF, am i supposed to fap with this!?, this one could easily tear my heart apart, you know?
Little Faggot
I blame ya shirou
CryingDick
Why...
I...
Can't hold..
All these feels...
P.M.
Someone should make a movie out of this
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Anonymous
dang man that's fucked up, I hope there a part 2 where he finds her.
Anonymous
Kinda expected it when he mentioned the mall.
I fucking hate myself sometimes.
Anonymous
"But then, five years later, when the mall is finished, he visits.

He wants to see that, even though all of his work to make her happy destroyed the future he'd hoped for, there is still something good to come from this. Still a place where those who would have been lost, rejected, harmed by the very nature of the world... where they could experience life as he wished she would be able to.

He watched for hours, tears coming and going, thin wraps held tightly in his hands, before finally forcing a smile to his face and turning around.

...only to find himself looking at a familiar face, untouched by bandages, with the softest smile in the world. Her hand is laid upon a bar, one he can remember designing specifically to ensure that she'd be able to walk alongside him freely.

And for the first time in five years, his smile is honest and pure.

For he has found her, and he has so many stories to tell."
Bloody smile
It's the world thats the problem, the atomic bomb is the solution.
Atomic gandhi ref
Minkeer
The feels
What the fuck dude, i come to fap, not feels
Anonymous
Damn...
This was not just a Hentai but a story. The building of the relationship between these two characters was truly inspiring to see. The fact that it ended in tragedy is heart-breaking and I hope to see a sequel someday. Hopefully the story doesn't end like this.

On the other hand, the sex scenes were absolutely amazing. Normally it is often hard to appreciate Vanilla but this time I think it was done really and integrated excellently into the story.
Anonymous
WTF with the end.....??!!!!
Hey who left this bowl of Feels here ???
Aozora
Tfw you tried to help, but failed miserably. so miserable that you will want to kms.
Anonymous
what
WHAT THE....
Anonymous
Hahaahaaua i gotta love how all the commentts are like "FUCK YOU! GIVE ME MY HAPPY MOMENT I DONT CARE ABOUT FAPPING!!!"
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ?
BORN TO FEEL
i'm mentally depressed for a year now
thanks
Mah harth, mah soul...
Dewottm80
DAMN
Fucking hell. GOD FUCKING DAMMIT WHERE THE FUCK IS THE SEQUEL
ZERO
EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE DAIJOUBU, some good samaritans from the internet told me that you need sharp eyes and clear mind to saw through to the true ending and it's a very open ending (note the chimneys and the moon)
Pugluxe
Xd
Anonymous
Fap Time! Nearly There.... *huff, Click..click...click.* Dafuq O_o'
Damnit.
Sec2end
I'm a grown degenerate, I can stand for this.
That's what I thought couple minutes ago. Damn.
CalneCa
Muy pena peko...

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