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Story arc confirmed, but its not my thing
...It was. Alright...

Not my thing, but it's an interesting read!
Anonymous
Just not my thing, kinda confusing with the converging time lines
Not my thing. It's okay not really offencive just confusing and incoherent plot. Plus art seems dated. I give it 3/5
Ms.panda
very interesting
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dLuna23
I actually liked it
The plot leaves more questions than answers, and feels incoherent. It's trying to convey the state of society but it lacks the exposition necessary to bind it all together (i.e. the mom's origin feels vague and poorly explained, and it doesn't mesh well with the plot). Also, the time skip breaks the pacing. Easily a 3/5.

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