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Anonymous
She didnt push him down tho
That was really good. Didn't expect here to be a virgin. Oh god this could be some coma dream. Damn Jacob's Ladder. Just playing.
Bloody smile
+1 will to live
*title gained* fucks until love accidental master (?)
A polar bear
VERY NICE
Cryptic Crow
What a cute ending. Cery much enjoyed it.
I love paizuri
Nice , it also have that emergence type art
I love paizuri
It would be better if it was an ongoing series,
Love the artstyle though
She is gorgeous GOD DAMN GORGEOUS
Phartsalot
Nice story, but writing and artwork not so good (She looked pretty good, but he looked like melting ice cream... always). I almost threw it away, I found it endurable, though I had to skip a lot of bad dialogue.
This was pretty good. I love the line at the beginning "Is this Gods gift to me, who deserves nothing".
simortua
Nice one.
Anonymous
That guy is ugly and she deserves a better guy then him

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