smooth skin, she must have
amazing stuffs thanks
i see.. so this what a more realistic writing of loli lusting looks like.. I've been curious
>>1091933 @ MayTrainer
that's naoki yamamoto for ya
hmm... it's ok. very safe though.
as i thought.. mom is the most erotic mom.
2.8? lol. this is pretty good, pulling it up to 3.5
i don't get it, this is good.
i swear if someone's gonna say "if it is this short just don't make it at all!"........
cave_shōta on
good book yes
just a few pages in i knew something is not right.
- a kid wouldn't normally think that much, excessive thought inputs.
- introduction of onee san totally throws immersion out of the fucking window - what do you mean a male kid around 8-10 years old, knows what tomboy and feminity is??? (protagonist could have just know onee san's family name or something for realism as well, not her first name, things like these are basic writing really)
- awkward smile from onee san after she protected protagonist for the first time in this work.
cave_shōta on Relyers
>>1093719 @ Anonymous214846
really solid too even when there is comedy
one of the better ones for this style, why do they not have a name/genre for these style of h-manga? like the characters kept on moving within the same background used for several pages.

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