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The sad oyster
This was interesting
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Bitch
Cheers!
Anonymous
well this is it this is what I read now dame my life has truly hit bottom


....so does anyone know if there is a planned sequel or ...
Would love to see the girl's side of the story.
Anonymous
This is basically lowest point in my life...
Better love story than twilight
Lord Venom
The greatest pleasure to find here is whenever We stumble across a rare pearl like this one, containing a plot which is actually interesting and fulfilling. It is so good to see the typical "evil bastard" getting literally broken, body and mind alike... Soooo damn refreshing... so elating... so... marvellousss...

If there is anything lackin, then it would be the story of the girl afterwards... It would be most interesting to see the MC searching for her, helping her arrange for an abortion and then trying his best in order to mend her broken soul and making her as happy as possible in order to repent for his inability to come to her aid when she needed him most desperately...

It would also be quite fascinating to witness the concoction of boundless guilt and bottomless fury slowly, but surely corroding the MC from whintin, no matter how much he tries his best to make Eri happy... Succumbing to his blazing fury and inability to let go of his regret, slowlu pushing his mind into the embrace of insanity... Causing him to begin leading a second life... During the day a hardworking employee of a medium-sized company, a loving husband of Eri and a doting father of their adorable twin children... Transforming at night into the very definition of a demon, haunting dark, narrow alleys... looking for prey... the tsunami of his bloodlust and wrath aimed precisely at lowlives, thugs and rapists... Yesss... It would be quite an interesting turn of events...
Kami
Karma.
Anonymous
Impregnation can really fuck up a girl’s entire life, y’know.
Would've kept the slut for my personal use, but that's fine too.

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