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This is the type of shit that really should've ended with a knife in the dumb criminal's throat and the mom's stomach. I love Moral Degradation but the true end for this material isn't "My mom is a whore now" it's "I killed my whore mother".

Also, I think another thing that has me not liking this story is just how weird it is. Typically there's a source of pressure in these stories in order to break the moral target, such as paying off a debt or societal pressure. In this one it's just "Despite me being a hard trained corrections officer and this being my job for multiple years, just now this one criminal is too domineering". Which this type of story would make sense if the criminal drugged her, but there's no mention of something like that happening. You can't have a strong will character with a high sense of justice and familial integrity just suddenly go "today's the day I simply change".

Idk man, this shit is just weird. I still jacked off, but only to a few specific scenes and not the actual story. A good wank should leave me going "yeah, okay I see that happening" even if the story is absurd. This one just had a bad story that felt like the ending was written first.
Daddy's Dick
Agreed with >>1062036 @ Anonymous134551 this felt so diluted ... As a NTR as well ... I have to admit Yama Hime Fumiko was my first NTR and the NTR that got me hooked into NTR but the way this story developed it's character sounds like a Wiz jizz ... How can you go from ultra good to lowest scum just like that ? And that retarded son ... Caught them in act and then didn't told even when he saw them next time ... I know getting cucked is one thing but self cucking is a turn off for me...

What in my opinion would be a good NTR is if the son wanted to do it with mom but mom yelled and pushed him away or something ...
>>1062528 @ Daddy's Dick
I agree with you man, self cucking kinda goes against what NTR stands for with me. Like, NTR is at it's best when something is forcibly taken. I'd term this more like freely given instead of taken lmao.

And what you wrote could be a pretty good start to a NTR! I'd really enjoy seeing a story progress down that road tbh. But for this story instead of having it be Mom/Stranger and the Dad/Son getting NTR'd, maybe have it be Mom/Son and the Dad getting NTR'd. Having the son being the rapist would add the moral pressure really needed to both the mom and dad, the mom obviously wants to "save" her son so she forces the dad to be passive in the interm. You could keep the same progression but just change that, bam: we get a passable NTR.

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